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Ever wanted to scream "I hate you!"  To the world?

Ever wanted to burn that big stalk of homework on your desk?

Ever wanted to hit someone for being stupid?

Ever wanted to just let it out

Then just smile and say "Oh, its fine."

When you're really thinking

Why do I have to do all the damn work again?

Ever wanted to slap some sense

Into people for being


Have you ever said "I'm ok."

When really, you're not?

Have you ever wanted to believe in lies?

Because there nicer then the truth?

Have you ever been ignored?

Because of what you believe in?

Have you ever thought the world would end?

Because you're having a bad day?

Have you ever thought of never waking up

Because you don't want to see the next day?

Have you ever wanted a friend?

I have.
Ever really wanted anything?

English poem we have to write. I like this one o3o

Wanted (c) Me
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MelodicSoul Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful poem~ <3
So many people can relate to this idea myself included and that tends to be what draws the reader in.
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
nice description of life miss :clap:
Eullie Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing~ I love all your literary pieces!
zamiel-meison Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011
it's a great poem D: i usually feel connnected to what you write, it hits in a place of my brain that makes it react... mmmm i guess im writting weir now :lol:

great job =D

I really want someone with whom i could share pieces of my life and whos existance makes me feel im not alone u_u that's why i thank a lot i got the friends i had at highschool :lol:
Y0k0Maybe Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
... yes. :(
crunchycookiez Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
Yes. I want all those things >.<
Zechira Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. Very much so.
gothss123 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
this is really gd! i love it cuz i can relate to it quite a bit :)
noschi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Student
this is just beautiful
PaD12 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it remid me somehow of me -.- but i love the feeling it giving to me its telling me to be honest to myself :) nevermind its a very great poem and i would do some more if i were u, ure talented in writing something like this :)
PointlessMu Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Its realy awesome :'D
And so true
LittleWednesday Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
This is an amazing poem, and so true! Awesome work.
ArtBennyRGrau Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Professional General Artist
This reminded me allot of the Henry Rollins poem I sent you :)
nice going :D
I always wanted to slap people in the face each time I hear
that its gonna be ok when they all know it aint :/
4mmoh Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
yup yup yup, oh so true.
I must say, this poem is amazing, especially with how open you are.
Either way, in the end, everybody keeps on going. Wonderful job.
I really like that you share these kinds of things. :hugs:
Caen-N Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
yep, sure have!
defectiveLOVE Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
wow!! this is amazing!! :D
SilverEyedBeauty Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student General Artist
You aren't the only one. I said "fuck yeah" to each and every one of these. But don't worry, it doesn't rain everyday
Lannytorres Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011
wow, I think I wanted to do most of these stuff at least once. Truth can be harder than lies but I feel safer with truth. Well written, I'm liking your style of writing :D
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