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"I wanna scream.
I wanna shout.
Not aloud to let it out.
The pain.
The sorrow.
Despair.
No one to talk to.
No one to trust.
Building up.
It's about to break.
About to shatter.
Until gone.
Disappear.
No one will know what happen...
Not even you."
-Lilium
I wanna shout.
Not aloud to let it out.
The pain.
The sorrow.
Despair.
No one to talk to.
No one to trust.
Building up.
It's about to break.
About to shatter.
Until gone.
Disappear.
No one will know what happen...
Not even you."
-Lilium
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Fail at spelling-very. Heres another one! 
Well, before DA, I would write down all my Lilium qoutes on facebook as statuses. Guess what? Theres this app that tells you statuses from the year 2010. Hurray! I get to spam you guys maybe
Enjoy~
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Do NOT use this product
Do NOT sell this Product
Everything I put here I made, give me credit if you made the product if I put tutorals
Everything I made is MINE have permission from me is you want to use.
Well, before DA, I would write down all my Lilium qoutes on facebook as statuses. Guess what? Theres this app that tells you statuses from the year 2010. Hurray! I get to spam you guys maybe
Enjoy~
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Do NOT use this product Do NOT sell this Product Everything I put here I made, give me credit if you made the product if I put tutorals Everything I made is MINE have permission from me is you want to use.Comments11
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You're missing a word or so near the end...
It's interesting how fast paced this is, in a sense, although that could be on account of the diction and the way that is quite straight-forward in itself.
I feel as if you could have made it more interesting through formatting and all, but the structure it is already in is quite cool, I feel...
I'm not sure about the use of the full stop, as you've put that at the end of every line, which makes it a bit... eh.
Not bad.
It's interesting how fast paced this is, in a sense, although that could be on account of the diction and the way that is quite straight-forward in itself.
I feel as if you could have made it more interesting through formatting and all, but the structure it is already in is quite cool, I feel...
I'm not sure about the use of the full stop, as you've put that at the end of every line, which makes it a bit... eh.
Not bad.