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Am I really a bad person?

Do I only hurt people?

Do I really not care for anything?

Liar. Hypocrite. Whore.

Really?

Do I do everything wrong?

Every damn little thing I ever try...

Just to be taken away.

To be proven wrong, to be looked down upon.

To be made fun of, to not say anything.

To be quite, to hold it in.

Am I really a bad person?
Bitter sweetness of a relationship...

with only the bitter left.

Am I (c) Me
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Ferelwing Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:huggle:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
whoever says you are like the person described above should have left you long ago... why would he stay when you're so bad? sounds like you're not...
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
:aww: I'm sorry... yes, it is usually what is left...
the bitter, and it usually sucks for a long time. :hmm:
It's good you are such a good writer, because you can use writing as a form of therapy to work through these crappy feelings, because they aren't true about you, at all... but it's difficult to feel good about yourself during a time like this, so keep writing your way through all the pain and etc.,

That's what I've always done, and thank goodness.

:rose:
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GoddessWashuHakubi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
You are as you are. No person is ever bad.
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Lannytorres Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
Those words are really deep my friend. If you ask me, I'll tell you that you are not a bad person. You have proven that to all of us, your friends. Life is just not easy, I know that :hug:
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MysticRumors Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
One of the best types of writing is making it so that the audience can relate to their work directly, adding more emotion. You've done that splendidly here. Thank you for that beautiful piece.
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Blackrose-Assasin Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
TT^TT now you've made me cry this is just too beautiful for my eyes
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dagwoodindustries Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Relatable. Quite, quite relatable. Almost hard to believe something so sweet at first, leaving you so winning to taste, would have such a sour, rotten core.
Good job.
:clap:
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4mmoh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
In my opinion, good relationships shouldn't go bitter; they just get a little bit sour.
But it always come out sweet again. Your writing speaks the truth that people know that exist. Wonderful job, there's others with you. :D
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ArtBennyRGrau Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate to say it but I feel like this all the time.
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Evil-Kitty-the-Pup Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand this so damn well.
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emo-loliconfangirl Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
i can so relate...i feel so bad that you wrote this because people couldnt realise this is how they make you feel
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Ketchup321 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm sorry dear, and no to answer your question. I'm sure you aren't
I hope you feel better though and I'm sorry :hug: :tighthug:
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PKMN-chan Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so fucking relevant to me right now... fuck.

AND I KNOW THAT SOUNDS MELODRAMATIC BUT HOLY SHIT IT'S SO TRUE
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Wichata Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Student General Artist
I like this because it actually applies to all sorts of relationships. Only one thing is that you mixed up quite and quiet on the second to last line. Other than that, I really enjoyed it!
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Hobbes12345 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you arent alone.....nobody ever is :)
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jcbm Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
I understand completely how you feel.
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Patrick2011 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
:noes: you are not a bad person :glomp::iconunicornglompplz:
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mogster58 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
So sad sweet girl! Sending you hugs! :hug: :hug:
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LadySasha01 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Excellent writing. I hope you are alright!:hug:
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ShinyHeels Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
For me you are always been so sweet,and talented..this emotional verse tells it too..you are emotional and talent sweety:heart:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
powerful writing! I want you to know that you are amazing :heart:
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immortal609 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
What's wrong? And don't tell me nothing, cause i know something is wrong.
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jgndhdshgfisoa Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
hmn has anyone telling this ?
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MasterofTomFoolery Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
can you do a his to this? because guys share this to an extent
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