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Am I really a bad person?

Do I only hurt people?

Do I really not care for anything?

Liar. Hypocrite. Whore.


Do I do everything wrong?

Every damn little thing I ever try...

Just to be taken away.

To be proven wrong, to be looked down upon.

To be made fun of, to not say anything.

To be quite, to hold it in.

Am I really a bad person?
Bitter sweetness of a relationship...

with only the bitter left.

Am I (c) Me
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Ferelwing Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
whoever says you are like the person described above should have left you long ago... why would he stay when you're so bad? sounds like you're not...
TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
:aww: I'm sorry... yes, it is usually what is left...
the bitter, and it usually sucks for a long time. :hmm:
It's good you are such a good writer, because you can use writing as a form of therapy to work through these crappy feelings, because they aren't true about you, at all... but it's difficult to feel good about yourself during a time like this, so keep writing your way through all the pain and etc.,

That's what I've always done, and thank goodness.

GoddessWashuHakubi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011
You are as you are. No person is ever bad.
Lannytorres Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011
Those words are really deep my friend. If you ask me, I'll tell you that you are not a bad person. You have proven that to all of us, your friends. Life is just not easy, I know that :hug:
MysticRumors Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
One of the best types of writing is making it so that the audience can relate to their work directly, adding more emotion. You've done that splendidly here. Thank you for that beautiful piece.
Blackrose-Assasin Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
TT^TT now you've made me cry this is just too beautiful for my eyes
dagwoodindustries Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Relatable. Quite, quite relatable. Almost hard to believe something so sweet at first, leaving you so winning to taste, would have such a sour, rotten core.
Good job.
4mmoh Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011
In my opinion, good relationships shouldn't go bitter; they just get a little bit sour.
But it always come out sweet again. Your writing speaks the truth that people know that exist. Wonderful job, there's others with you. :D
ArtBennyRGrau Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate to say it but I feel like this all the time.
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